Shiro Yamada - Meister - Student

[Shiro Yamada]

Yamada; Shiro; Meister

Name: Shiro Yamada

Nickname: Shi

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Race: Meister

Position: Student

Class: One Star

Partner: None for now.

A Strong Body

Picture: 

Appearance:

Shiro has a slim figure, with a tad less than average amount of
muscle. She has an average sized torso, with limbs that are slightly
longer than what they should be. Her fast metabolism makes it difficult for
Shiro to gain and keep muscle as well as weight. She stopped growing at
five-foot-five-inches, and remained at 105 pounds. Without a heavy weight keeping
her anchored, this allows her to be nimble and quick.

Her facial features look very innocent. She has barely blemished
skin, with large violet colored eyes. Her nose is small and she has small,
pale colored lips. Her hair is purple and it's kept long, up to the small of her back.
The clothes she wears is a black uniform with white and gold accents. The uniform's dress is
black and long enough to go to a bit above her ankles and has white and gold swirls at the bottom. The sleeves are half detached from the dress. Shiro wears black tights underneath and white boots. Shiro's eyesight is not that well, so she wears glasses.

Height: 5 foot 5 inches. (5'5")

Weight: 105 lbs

Fighting Style: As a fight begins, she makes sure she's a good distance away from the target to analyze how they move and attempt to foreshadow their movements. Shiro fights dirty, occasionally using factors other than weapon to fight. She'll use sand, or the such, to blind her enemy or knock over her target.

Personality: Shiro is a very calm person. She usually looks happy or shy, with
a barely-there smile. She's easily embarrassed and will shy away from people if she doesn't know them. Shiro has trust issues and won't trust people until she's certain they can get her trust.
When someone means something to her, she'll stick by their side. The other side that isn't shown as often is her cold side.

She's calculating and emotionless in this side, holding no mercy to her enemies. The
only thought in her mind during these times, is to complete the task with
no complications. Shiro usually partakes in crowd watching, noticing how one moves or what
they're doing. She'll barely talk to anyone, but if she does, she'll usually try to have a good time.

During a battle, Shiro will try to keep a distance between her and her target. When she
sees an odd movement, she'll act upon it. If they make a move to come towards her, she will start moving. She'll take her partner's commentary as advice. Speaking of partner,
when she has a partner, they are her pride and joy. Like a best friend. 

Inside the Soul

Weapon form: N/A

Partial Form: N/A

Abilities: Shiro has the ability of soul perception. Her eyes flash a lighter color of violet. The souls are identified by different colors around the person. Humans are light blue, weapon and meister colors vary. As of now, this is all she can see.

Resonances: None at the moment

Out of your Mind

Strengths: Intelligent, strategic, flexible, agile

Weaknesses: Physically weak, low endurance, psychologically weak, poor eyesight

Hobbies: cooking, drawing, studying

Likes: sweets, night, chess pieces, dogs

Dislikes: bitter food, enclosed spaces, bright lights, loud noises

Aspirations: Shiro wants to make a change in the world by getting rid of dangers like kishins and witches.

History: Born and raised in a very small town with the population of 102 in Missouri. She
was raised in a small house with her parents on a ranch. Her parents helped out at the ranch,
but they soon got a better job out of town. At the age of four, her parents left her with an old couple and they went to work at their new job. The couple didn't interact much with her, and
she soon became less social. She enjoyed talking to people when
they came to speak to her, but she wouldn't make any moves to start conversations.

At the age of ten, she started to notice that sometimes she'd see odd colors around
people momentarily. Her adoptive parents, the old couple her genetic parents left her
with, sent her to the store to buy things. One time, someone started to pick on
her on her way home. Shiro automatically grabbed a sharp object in the bag and proceeded
to stab them with it. An employee ran out after hearing screaming, threw her off the kid, and brought him inside. She ran back home with her hands covered in blood. After that, she wasn't allowed to leave the house.

At 13, she started seeing the colors around people more often and was finally allowed to leave again. She began to continue the tasks they gave her. Go to the store, get the package from
the post office or get the food from the neighbor. One day in June, after she came home
with a pot of rice from her neighbors, she was shocked to see that her parents had come to visit.
She hadn't seen them since she was seven. They spent a day together, but it was so short and they were gone too soon. On her 15th birthday, she was admitted to Shibusen. She attended the NOT class and, at 16, she went to the one-star class.

Extra Notes: sloppy makeouts

Behind the strings

Alias: Shiro!

Other characters: None

Face Claim: Sheele (Akame ga Kill!)

RP Sample:Please write at least a three paragraph sample of your character.
"Go to the store. Here's what you'd need to make us some stew and shepherds pies. It'll be on the counter," A voice from down the hall said. Shiro looked up from the book she was reading, placed a piece of paper between the pages, put the book on her bed and walked down the hallway.

"Okay," She responded as she picked up the list and looked it over, "I'll get those." She started to walk towards the door, opening it and making sure the door stayed closed. It had the habit of springing open. She walked down the stairs and began to head down the dusty road. After about half an hour, she arrived at the small, beat-up looking gas station. Opening her wallet, she took out her last twenty dollar bill. I need to get more money, I guess. Shiro thought, walking inside and looking around.

It was emptier than usual. Just a bored-looking guy at the register. She shrugged it off, picked up a shopping basket and went to a freezer. Soon, she began to get enough for both the stew and the pies. After grabbing the second to last item, the last one she needed was dough. Apparently, she needed a lot of it as well. Looking in all the freezers and shelves, she spotted a shelf with the dough.

The shelf was too high for her to reach. Even standing on her toes, she was too short for it.
"Uh, excuse me-" She looked over to the man who acknowledged her, "-could you get this for me?"
The man let out a sigh in a dramatized way and stood up, walking over soon after wards. "How many?"
"I just need seven of the bags..."
He sighed again, picking them up and putting them in the baskets before walking back to the register and sitting back down. When she turned to go to the register, a girl suddenly walked in the store and began to chat with him. Shiro waited for about an hour until the girl bought a stick of gum and left. Shiro looked at the clock with wide eyes. Oh, no.. I'm late.. She quickly paid for her items and ran out the store with her heavy paper bag of ingredients.

Another half hour passed before she came home. As soon as she opened the door, an angry voice rang out.
"Shiro! Is that you? We've been starving for two hours! This is disappointing. Please just hurry and make the food." Her adoptive father said as his anger quickly faded.

As Shiro began to start making the meal, she finished about twenty minutes later and they sat down to begin eating.

[Rylux]

There are just a few things that need some tweaking before she’s ready to go.

Name: Why does she have a Japanese name if she is apparently a white girl from Missouri?

Appearance: This a is a little short, please make it at least 200 words

Personality: This is also somewhat short, please make at least 300 words.
What do you mean by other side? You make it seem as if this is a different personality and not a part of her personality.

Height/weight: As of now she is a tad underweight, please up this to at least 127 Lbs. Or up this to around 120 lbs and add that she is frail as a weakness.

Abilities: How far can she see?
At her current level she would be able to see the difference between a pure soul and a corrupt soul, she would not be able to differentiate more than this until a she developed it more.

Aspirations: Why does she want to change the world like this? For something ambitious like this I would expect some reason for it in her history or personality.

History: Why did her parents just leave her for no reason?
Suddenly stabbing someone at the age of ten? That seems unlikely
She couldn’t leave the house between the ages of ten and thirteen? What about school?
How did she suddenly go to Shibusen?

RP sample: You can remove the first sentence

Extra: Just remove the weapon information
Please look over the formatting, there are some odd breaks in the paragraphs
It is a common practice to use color codes around text to have speech stand out more.

Fix up these things and she’ll be good to go.