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Post by Deleted on May 22, 2014 0:33:41 GMT -5
Svalinn; Gram;Weapon
Name: Gram Svalinn
Nickname: Gram
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Race: Weapon
Position: Student
Class: One Star
Partner: None Assigned Yet
A Strong Body
Appearance: Gram is a tall lean muscular man, his most noticeable feature is his lacking of a left arm. The only part of his left arm remaining is the very top part of his arm bone that is connected to his shoulder. He wears thick rectangular rimmed black corrective glasses, he keeps them pressed firmly set against his face. Gram's hair is such a dark brown that in some light it almost seems black, the sides and back of his hair have been cut down to an almost buzz cut length. The top of his hair is roughly about three inches long and very scraggly looking, he keeps it all brushed forward and off of the sides of his head giving him pointy and scraggly bangs that reach just past his eyes but do not cover them. This style has an overall slimming effect on his face, not that it needed one. Gram's face is thin, the dark circles under his eyes, his skinny cheeks and neck all make his face look very thin and slightly pointed along his jaw and nose. His eyes are a light brown almost chocolate color. His shoulders are very wide prominent giving him a tall scarecrow like frame, very skinny and thin looking but his muscles are still very noticeable. His right arm is very strong and sturdy looking and is very long, his hand is very muscular and strong but not too big. He has a slim lean torso that slowly angles down into an average size sturdy looking waist. He has long lean and wiry scarecrow like legs. Gram wears a soft t-shirt like pull over hoody that is a very specific shade of light blue. He keeps the right sleeve rolled up to his elbow and has cut the left sleeve down to wear it fits just over his shoulder bone. He wears very tight form fitting black dress pants that appear to be well worn from him sleeping in them, the pant legs terminate just at his ankles. His shoes are an off brand of chuck taylors that are black and silver, these shoes appear to be very well kept.
Height: 6'0.
Weight: 160 pounds
Fighting Style: The fighting style he uses when independent he developed based on judo, taking advantage of his sickle hand partial transformation he likes to grapple and wrestle with an opponent until he a good shot at a vital spot with his hand. When he fights with a meister he like to use his intellect and strategy to trick and out smart the opponent, he likes to take advantage of the fact he can transform and untransform to trick and get behind enemies.
Personality: Gram is a mostly docile and quite, he is not shy but generally doesn't want to expend the energy to talk when he doesn't need to. If someone approaches him and starts a conversation he won't ignore them and will continue the conversation, but he doesn't feel the need to start conversations with other people if he doesn't have to. Though when he does talk to someone he shows compassion and tolerance in his words and expressions as well as complimenting people on a regular basis. He is very kind and compassionate to other people, especially those that others are mean to. The only times in which he will go out of his way to talk to someone is when he sees someone who is sad or has been abused or bullied. Gram feels a compulsion to comfort and help people he feels have been wronged. He is generally sluggish, lethargic, and slow with his movements and words. Gram walks slow, talks slow and has slow reflexes, it also seems to take him a while to think over an idea or come up with a response. He seems at most times to have just gotten out of bed or about to fall asleep even if though he is wide awake. He is very agreeable and compliant, even if he believes he is right he won't argue or disagree. Many of his quirks and actions are caused by his minor depersonalization disorder, a condition that causes him to feel disconnected from this world and his body believing that it is not real. Though the condition does not cloud everything in his life, there are still some things he feels connected and emotionally present for, such as helping innocent people and fighting a righteous fight. He is addicted to fighting harder than any drug addict is addicted to their drug of choice. During a fight he completely connects and the focus and challenge shoot through his veins like nitrus amping him up. Gram views sexual orientation as a myth created to control peoples lives, he views his sexuality simply as if he likes you he doesn't question it. Though relationships are hard for him because of his difficulty making connections with people. He tends to find it easier to form connections with vulnerable, weak and victimized individuals, a fact that he keeps secret and feels ashamed for and constantly punishes himself for.
Inside the Soul
Weapon form: Gram is a one handed dual edged crescent sickle blade.His weapon form has an approximate 10 inch handle that is of a medium round thickness so that it fits firmly in a hand. The handle is straight the entire length and is covered in a soft but thick light blue rope wrapped tightly around its length. The handle ends in a well balanced one inch spike pommel used for mainly balance but could also be used for attack.
The metal of the blade is one solid piece that goes from the tip of the blade all the way through the handle and ends with the end of the pommel. The blade is the shape of a crescent formed out of an almost perfect semi-circle, the width of the flat of the blade gradually shortening until it reaches the tip of the blade approximately two rounded feet away from where it started. The straight vertical length of the blade is about a foot and five inches. The blade is thin and sharp along it's entire length until it become a medium thickness when the blade meets the handle.
The metal of the blade has a highly polished silver shine to it and the inner edge of the blade is almost white. The weapon appears to be almost perfectly well kept except for a wide scratch that runs from the base of the blade along the inner edge side of the handle becoming a dark discoloration on the rope of the handle ending half way down.
The weight of the weapon feels to be about three pounds and is weighted evenly and balanced.
Partial Form:His original weapon form was his right forearm and hand turned into the sickle blade of his weapon form, but after the first time he transformed and the accident and the trauma must have changed it. His right hand now transforms to a much smaller version of his sickle blade.
Abilities: He has a very flexible soul and can either take the lead or follow.
Resonances:N/A
Out of your Mind
Strengths: Intelligent, Strategic, Combat Skills, Physically Strong
Weaknesses: Disabled ( Left Arm ), Poor Eyesight ( Has to wear glasses ), Slow Reflexes, Psychologically Weak
Hobbies: Games of any kind, Learning and Studying, Being with People
Likes: Spicy Food, Sleeping, Comedy, Fighting, Knowledge, Makeouts
Dislikes: Mushy Food, Sloppy People, Rude People, Hatefulness, Being Alone, Other people being sad
Aspirations: To protect people from hate and evil.
History: Gram was born to a family known for their very strong wavelengths, this has caused them to want to maintain an image of respectability and class. When Gram's biological mother got pregnant out of wedlock the family took this as an offence to their reputation and forced her to give up the baby. She found a nice pleasant lesbian couple from Aberdeen, Scotland to raise the boy, her only request that he not be told of his real family. Gram was raised by the couple to be respectful, compassionate, and tolerant. They raised him to be a good honest catholic, and his childhood was happy and simple. The more he grew the more compassionate and friendly he became, only wanting to help people who didn't have it as easy as him. Around his fifteenth year he began to have alot of dreams about fighting and weapons, he brushed it off believing it to be nothing. He didn't tell his mothers about these dreams because he did not think anything of them. One stormy night, thunder exploded in the clouds, he jolted awake in a cold sweat, pitch black he couldn't see anything but he could feel something was weird. His right arm felt cold and stiff , he brought it up to his face to see what was wrong. Lightning cracked through the sky outside his window, the light ran across the blade that now took the place of his forearm. He screamed and swung his arm away from him, this is when the blade passed straight through the muscle and bone of his left arm. Severing everything below his shoulder, he fell over in and screamed in agony. His mothers found him and took him to the hospital, the doctors where unable to reattach the arm. After he was out of surgery his mothers told him the truth about his family and where he came from, expecting a strong reaction of some sort his mothers where shocked when he seemed completely indifferent to anything that has happened or was happening. This behavior continued and they got him checked out by a group of psychologists. The doctors determined that he had developed a mild form of denationalization disorder. After he recovered and was able to go home his mothers started making him practice his transformation and hone his abilities so that no other accident could happen again. He also had to cope with his DPD and how it would effect social interactions out in the world. After a few years of training and fighting at many dojos his mothers contacted Shibusen to enroll him. They felt as though it was the right time for him go out into the world and deal with who he was.
Behind the strings
Alias: Gram
Other characters: N/A
RP Sample:Gram stepped out of the taxi onto the hot cracked desert earth, after having paid the driver and tipped him generously. He walked forward towards the sun flooded city, gazing at the climbing levels of building upon building. "How gaudy, is this even real? I wouldn't doubt it." He whispered, as not to offend anyone who might overhear him, even though he could see in a straight mile in every direction on this flat terrain. He continued walking toward Death City, knowing that once he got there he would be faced with many exhausting social interactions. Gram wondered what might be in store for him in this strange school for human weapons and other strange people. "I'm gonna have to get used to allot of new strange situations. I can do this. I can do this." He continued to speak in a hushed voice to avoid offend anyone who might be hiding in the sand. He picked up the pace of his walking because it felt as thou the sun had focused his beams of heat directly at Gram's neck. "I think this place might be hell. What good reason would man have for living in this God forsaken place?" He spoke with an even softer tone knowing his word were harsh even though he came from Scotland were the temperatures are generally mildly cold. He arrived at the edge of the cities structures, stepping onto the pavement he let out a sigh of relief as he swung under the shade to rest in the shade. Taking comfort in the cool shaded side walk he as he slid down to sit he let in the sights and smells of the city that he could perceive from his lonely little spot under the shelter of the building. "What am I doing here? Where even is here? This is absurd none of this can be real. I guess I have to play along." Gram whispering even softer knowing that there definitely people around. As the hot air sat on Gram's skin and the cool of the shade made a sharp contrast that comfortably slowly lulled him into unexpected sleep he wondered if he would meet anyone who could possibly make this situation better.
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Post by Rylux on May 22, 2014 13:28:46 GMT -5
Alright you look pretty good here. Just a few things we’d like you to tweak. Partial Form: You say his partial was his right but is now his right. Just say it was always his right arm. History:-Why did he start having dreams about weapons before he knew he was one? Maybe make it so he knew he was a weapon first or met a demon weapon or something to trigger the dreams. - You can still have him be adopted and everything as it is but if you want to make use of his family having strong wavelengths in the future its going to need more explanation. If not then its fine. -Just include that his family was also demon weapons or that there were known demon weapons in his family. Extra: Please double space between paragraphs so there is a space between where one starts and stops. It makes paragraphs easier to read and is very helpful in reading actual post. Other than these little tweaks he looks good and I’m excited to see him in action.
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