Ansel Kudera (Weapon)

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Kudera; Ansel;Human

Name: Ansel Kudera

Nickname: Ansel

Age: 14

Gender: Male

Race: Weapon 

Position: Student

Class: One Star

Partner: None.

A Strong Body

Picture: 

Appearance: 
Standing at 5’2 and weighing about 125 lbs, Ansel is pretty petite and short for a boy. He tends to be mistaken as being younger than he actually is, he is rather slim and appears frail to others who don’t know him. His attire usually consists of a hoody, black skinny pants, combat boots, a black cap that says panda bear
(www.polyvore.com/ansel/set?id=119771556). He tends to wear a hoody all the time; unless he goes to the gym then he usually wears a t shirt. He carries around a bear key chain that his mother had given him at all times, it is a very important object to him. (www.okajewelry.com/product_images/l/858/Red_Pendant__Crystal__pave_Teddy_Bear_Key_Ring_-3__56471_std.JPG)

He has short, dark red hair and green eyes that look like the color of an emerald. One thing people tend to notice right away is the medical eye bandage he has on. He has a lot of self inflicted scars on various areas of his body, due to that he tends to cover them up with medical bandages. If asked about why he has bandages on his body he gets very nervous and often doesn't explain why, unless he knows the person well enough.

Height: 5'2

Weight: 125 lbs

Fighting Style:
Ansel is rather agile do to his small size. Timing is an important aspect for Ansel, if he were to time a attack wrong and miss it would be hard for him to defend himself since the enemy would have an advantage due to him being able to grab him.

Personality:
Ansel is a very kind and caring person once you get to know him, he will be very shy at first.
He is very loyal to those he trusts and will do anything in his power to protect them, even if it means he will get injured severely. Ansel is very shy when interacting with others he doesn't know, often not making eye contact and twiddling with his bear keychain. He is very gentle most of the time and hates seeing the people he cares about get hurt. When put in a situation where he is unable to protect those he cares about he breaks down and blames himself, sobbing uncontrollably. Usually at moments like this it is hard to snap him out of it. Ansel tends to self inflict wounds on his body when greatly upset, so it is usually best if he isn't left alone. Although he will still try to inflict wounds on himself even when watched, believing by doing this he will be forgiven for being so weak by his father.

Inside the Soul

Weapon form: 
Overall Length: 55 Inches

Spikes 2.5 Inches
When transforming into weapon form the flail is approximately 55 inches and the spikes are 2.5 inches long. It is the color of real silver often found on expensive jewelry, if a ray of light shines upon it; it will shine somewhat brightly.

Partial Form:

His right arm can transform into the chain part of the flail, while his right hand takes the form of the spikes. This form is slightly smaller in size compared to his full weapon form being the overall length of 18 Inches.

Resonances:
None

Out of your Mind

Strengths:
Agile
Determined
Caring

Weaknesses: 
Lack of depth perception
Tends to get upset easily
Low self confidence

Hobbies:
Hobbies:
Listening to music (With his headphones)
Writing in his notebook
Reading at the library
Being out in a forest area and relaxing
Going for jogs to stay fit
Playing games on his gameboy
Browsing the web or playing computer games (If computer available)
Likes:
Quiet places
Increasing knowledge
Cute things such as teddy bears
Music

Likes:
Likes:
Quiet places
Increasing knowledge
Cute things such as teddy bears
Music

Dislikes: 
Feeling or being vulnerable
Being unable to protect those he loves
Conflict (Such as arguing, yelling, etc.)
Loud places
Being called weak

Aspirations: 
Become strong enough to protect those he loves, and prove his father wrong that he is a "pussy".

History: 
Ansel grew up in Nevada City, California with his mother. It was a rather nice and peaceful community; everyone got along with each other and helped each other out. Although he didn't have any friends, due to his shyness and being rather clumsy.He did have a dog that he loved very much named Russell. His family got on pretty decently, although they were on a bit of the poor side. Ansel's father had passed away from stomach cancer when he was 8, this event didn't impact him too much because him and his father didn't get along very well. His father would often call Ansel a pussy, blaming his wife for being too soft on him.So when Ansel's father died he didn't really care, he was glad even. Due to his father's always calling him weak,pussy,sissy; Ansel tends to get very upset if he feels like he is weak or vulnerable.Feeling like his father was right and that he was weak and a sissy.

On Ansel’s 10th birthday his mother decided to surprise him with a gift from the town toy store.
Ansel thought they were just going grocery shopping since he hadn't gotten a gift for his birthday since his dad passed away, due to the fact that they were always low on money. “Mom we passed up the grocery store it was back there.” He pointed out to his mother puzzled. His mom continued walking like she didn't hear him and went into the toy store, Ansel followed extremely confused. He saw his mother talking to the clerk at the desk and pointing at a small box. “Ansel honey come here, I have a surprise for you.” His mother said beckoning to him. She presented the box and placed it in his hands, “Go on open it.” She urged him.

Ansel opened the box and there was a small teddy bear on a key chain, he squealed in delight. It was the exact same bear he had been wanting for months, every time they would go out to town he would stare at it from the display window of the toy store. One day he noticed the teddy bear was no longer in the display window and grew sad, thinking someone must have bought it. But now he knew his mother had reserved it for him all this time. “Thank you mom! I love it!” He exclaimed embracing his mother in a hug. They walked home together after that, it was such a peaceful day.

Ansel had lost his left eye when he was younger, the doctors couldn't really figure out what was wrong until it was too late and he had gone completely blind in that eye. The doctors decided it would be best to remove his left eye, since whatever caused him to go blind in that eye could possibly affect the other eye.This happened when his father was still alive,so they had enough money for medical care.

When Ansel was younger his mother had told him that the people in her family were all weapons, and that he was one too. She informed him that they had attended Shibusin, as did she. Ansel knew right then and there that he wanted to become stronger, prove his father wrong that he was a "pussy". Even though his father wouldn't see it, it gave him a sense of self worth and confidence.He wanted to be able to become strong to protect those he loves, his mother after hearing his plan agreed to let him go and paid a bus to drive him to Shibusin.

Extra Notes: 
He carries around the teddy bear keychain he got from his mother wherever he goes, either in his pocket or on his bag.

He loves listening to music on his head phones.

Ansel stands in more of a shy and closed off pose, not making eye contact unless he knows the person, with his arms crossed.

Behind the strings

Alias: Caelix / Chrissy

Other characters: None.

Face Claim: Taito Vocaloid.

RP Sample:

"Your a real sissy, you know that!" His father yelled slamming his fist onto the table. Tears streamed down Ansel's face he had fallen and sprained his wrist while playing outside. "I-I need to go to the doctor my wrist is hurt." Ansel stammered. His father's face grew red with frustration, he grabbed Ansel's injured wrist roughly squeezing it. Ansel cried out in pain "S-stop it! It hurts father!". "Quit being such a baby! I can't believe I have such a sissy for a son." His father retorted gritting his teeth. Just then Ansel's mother walked in, she had finally come home from the store. She quickly ran over and grabbed her husband's hand, yanking it away from Ansel's wrist. "What the hell do you think your doing! His wrist is clearly injured why would you squeeze it like that?!" She yelled. Ansel's wrist had a purple bruise looking mark on it, "I told father I needed to go to the doctor, b-but he refused." Ansel replied. His mother and father began arguing and yelling at each other, Ansel not wanting to hear such conflict quickly ran outside.

[Rylux]

Alright let’s get started.

Firstly please use the template correctly, the center tags make the profile look neater

Height/Weight: Please up his weight to 125lbs.

Fighting Style: First off all you have for Ansel involves his knife, which he wouldn’t have. If you want him to have the knife there must be a Really good reason for it as there is no reason for a Shibusen student to have an non-demon weapon, even less so for a demon weapon to have one.

Next why is he stealthy? Did he learn to be stealthy? If so where, why, and from whom? Is he just doing what he thinks works for being stealthy? From the rest of his profile it looks like he would have no combat training at all let alone something like stealth that takes precision.

If Ansel hasn’t seen combat neither would Axel. How does he have habits if he has never fought? I doubt either the orphanage he was in or Shibusen would allow him to dismember anyone.

Personality: Ok, if you want to do the multiple personality thing you’re going to need to have at least 300 words for each personality.

The whole Axel personality sounds like someone who would fall to madness and become a kishin egg. If he is like this Shibusen is more likely to just kill Ansel than allow him to attend the school.

Weapon Form: One, you need to actually describe the weapon form and how it looks. Two, it’s a flail not a chain mace.

Partial Form: First remove the part you’re supposed to remove. Second, again you need to actually describe the form and how it looks and acts.

Strengths/Weaknesses: Can’t have a bowie knife and that wouldn’t be a strength either way.
None of these are weaknesses and all of them only apply to Axel. As they share the same body the strengths and weaknesses would/need to apply to both.
Go with actual weaknesses like his lack of depth perception, the massive blind spot he would have. Things like that.

History:-Why does he have no friends? I find that hard to believe in general, even more so if everyone in the community gets along.
-When did his dad die? It seems like an event that would influence him yet you barely mention it.
-If a kishin attacked hiding would probably be a safer option than everyone running around outside where the kishin egg is.
-If the kishin egg was easily able to rip his mom in half why would it only tear out his eye?
-Did they take the dog with them? If not why was it there?
-A kishin wouldn’t be distracted by a dog. It can do next to nothing to damage it so it would just ignore the dog and kill him.
-The trend of people being saved by Shibusen teams at the last minute is really being overdone. Does this have to happen? Is it so important to his character that this happens?
-No. He isn’t going to be the only survivor of a kishin attack. If there was warning only a handful of people probably would have been killed.
-Why does the team have tranquilizer? There is no reason they would have anything aside from their demon weapon.
-He wouldn’t be able to go to Shibusen just because his father told him to. He would need to actually show that he was a weapon before he could go.
-How does a 14 year old get from California to Death City, Nevada? Even more so if he lived in an orphanage and probably possessed few things or money.

Extra Notes: –The keychain should be mentioned in his appearance if it is such an important thing to him.
-Why does he dislike medicine so much? What is the reason for this?

Face Claim:That depends if you want to use Taito as your face claim or not.

RP Sample:You don’t need to specify if the scene happened or not.
No hospital is going to force him to take pills like that. It’s actually illegal. If he was in such a state he would one be restrained and two get medicine through an IV.
Is Ansel aware of Axel? Also I doubt Axel would be able to take over the body that easily.
No orderly is going to act like that
If Axel was doing things like this there is no way he would be allowed into Shibusen.

Extra: You need to have your account name match the character’s name, first and last
Read the rules and character rules, you are mission something from your profile
We feel you need to do more research about Dissociative personality disorder. It would not happen the way to described nor would either personality be aware of the other.

[Deleted]

Thanks for the feedback, although I am confused as to how you want me to describe the weapon. Could you please provide a example of how you want me to describe it?

[Rylux]

Describe the weapon form like what does it look like, its size, how long of a chain it has. Describe the weapon as if there was no picture to show it. Look at other weapon profiles around the site for examples.

[Deleted]

I have another question, So I looked at how people describe how long the weapon is and such. But the problem is, I have trouble with math and numbers so I don't really understand when they say cm and kg. So what would I put then?

[Rylux]

That's just unit of measurement (centimeters and kilograms). You can just use feet and inches, that is preferred actually. If you have any further questions please pm me as to not clog up the profile.

[Rylux]

Alright looking better


Personality: This is too short, it needs to be at least 300 words.

Fighting Style: Expand this more, how does he attack? All you have is that he is agile and relies on timing but how does he fight? Punches? Kicks? Grapples?

Weapon Form: How long is the handle, how long is the chain?

Partial Form: How much of his arm transforms? From the shoulder down? From the elbow down?

Strengths/Weaknesses: Caring is not a strength. Getting upset and low self-confidence are not weaknesses unless driven to extremes.

You have his likes listed twice

History: –Space after periods. Without spaces it makes this much harder to read
-After the third paragraph you seem to go backwards, Why not just tell us his history in order from the start?
-How did he lose his eye? You make it sound like some sort of disease took it so what disease would that be? Do note if you go this route it has to be something that would make him go blind and be stopped by the removal of his eye.
-So his mom could afford to send him on an 8 hour bus ride by himself to Death City while he was no older than 14?
-How old was he when he went to Shibusen?
-He couldn’t just go to Shibusen because his mom said she was a weapon. He would need to show that he was a weapon before he could go.

RP Sample: This needs to be at least 250 words and be like an actual post.
Sprains don’t usually work like that and if he gets hurt that easily he isn’t going to last as a Shibusen student.

Extra: Read the Rules and Character Rules.