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Post by Deleted on Apr 14, 2014 0:05:51 GMT -5
Russell; Sammy; Human
Name: Sammy Russell
Nickname: Sam
Age: 13
Gender: Female (but also tomboy)
Race: Weapon
Position: Student
Class: One Star
Partner: None yet, but asking Conor Sullivan
A Strong Body
Appearance: Sam has fair skin, dark gray (almost black) hair, and pale, violet eyes. Despite her dark hair and eyes, she is very cheery and is often smiling. Being a tomboy, Sam refuses to wear makeup. She is 5'4", and slightly muscular (lifting grocery bags and school books pays off ^^'), and weighs 97 lbs. She is almost always seen wearing a t-shirt with sweatpants, jeans, or gym shorts, with tennis shoes and sometimes a beanie or baseball cap, because she prefers to wear comfortable clothes over "fashionable" clothes. Edit: I forgot to add this originally, but her hair is shoulder-length and has a couple layers in it.
Height: 5'4"
Weight: 97 lbs
Fighting Style: Sam's fighting style is usually a pretty balanced combination of dodging and attacking- she usually will attack one to three times, then back up and dodge to avoid attacks from the enemy. She has, surprisingly, never taken a martial arts class- her family couldn't afford the only nearby class. So, she developed her own fighting skills, from defending herself from her brother's attacks to simply tackling in a football game. She mostly punches, tackles, tries to trip the enemy and/or knock them over, and may use objects near her in combat- for example, when she was in 5th grade, a gang of boys at least 3 years older than her had trapped her in an alley. Sam had looked around, finding a discarded piece of a metal fence just lying on the ground. She used that carefully to get out, trying to not hurt the boys as much as possible. She prefers to hurt as little as possible, especially when facing just a human.
Personality: Sam is a tomboy. I know I mentioned it above a couple times, but I decided to add it here too. By tomboy, I don't just mean a female that likes things mostly males like- I mean a full on tomboy. Her best friends are usually male, she basically dresses like a boy, and loves things like video games and sports. Sam's favorite sport is soccer, but she also likes football and swimming. She enjoys baseball and basketball, but she isn't the best at either. Sam is also pretty friendly. She can be shy sometimes around adults she doesn't know, but in most cases loves to meet new people and make new friends. I mean, who doesn't want more people to hang around with? Sam is kind of the opposite of her younger brother- she isn't loud and obnoxious, loves playing outside, and doesn't demand to have everything she wants. She wouldn't get anywhere doing that anyway, as her family is a bit poorer than other families, especially since her mother lost her job. Is Sam bossy, you may ask, or arrogant, or self-centered? Well, no, not really. Maybe a little self-centered. But mostly, Sam cares about others and not just about herself. She would risk her life for her closest friends and family, and would do anything to make sure they wouldn't get hurt. Inside the Soul
Weapon form: Sam is a poleaxe, here's a picture: (The only difference is that the wooden stick part (haha feel so stupid calling it that) is black)
Partial Form: Sam's partial form is the poleaxe's blade sticking out of the side of her right arm. May post a picture of this later also, I'll have to draw it, this is kind of hard to explain.
Resonances:No partner yet
Out of your Mind
Strengths: -Muscular for a girl -Quick-thinking -Swiftness (Though she can't run as fast as others, she can duck and jump quickly)
Weaknesses: -Not a very fast runner -Can sometimes get hot-headed and rush into battle -Clumsy; often drops things and trips
Hobbies: Reading, sports, video games, sketching, drawing cartoon characters, writing, listening to music, and playing the drums
Likes: -Bright aqua/ice blue (favorite color) -Rock music -Super Mario Bros -Red apples, pizza, mac n' cheese (some of her favorite foods)
Dislikes: -Green apples -Country music -Her brother -SUPER long books (as in over 1000 pages)
Aspirations: Sam has a couple dreams for the future- become a death scythe, finally beat her friend Max at a racing video game, and be an artist (that's at least slightly well-known)
History: Note: I am going to try to go in order.... You may be wondering how Sam got introduced to the DWMA. Well, one day, she was playing outside, being "chased" by her imaginary friend. Her friend made her angry, and she started "hitting" him. Somehow her rage created a poleaxe blade, which stuck out of her arm. She curiously sliced a stick cleanly in half with it, and basically mowed part of the lawn for her father. Her father, Michael, eventually noticed, and having friends at the DWMA he contacted the school. The next day, a teacher was sent to transport Sam to the school. Michael couldn't pay for the whole family to stay at the school, he could barely pay for Sam. This was heartbreaking for her, especially since she had no idea what was going on- only that she was being taken away to a special school, unable to see her friends and family as often as she wished. Sam was trained to control her weapon form as she grew up, being raised at the academy. As she got older, she did some hand-to-hand combat practice with a couple kids just a couple years older than her, and also practiced transforming part of herself to use in battle. She taught herself how to effectively block with the blade on her arm. Then, when she turned 13, she was finally told that she was old enough to find a partner.
(I'm sorry this is kind of short, but there isn't much else to put that I can think of....)
Extra Notes: I don't think there's anything...
Behind the strings
Alias: Sam
Other characters: None currently
Face Claim: I don't know what a face claim is ^^'
RP Sample:Sam watched the boy she was facing carefully. Watched for any sort of offensive movements. But nothing was happening so far. Sam looked Jaxon, the 12-year-old she was facing in a practice battle with no meisters, in the eye, and could tell by the look on his face that he was...... scared? No, nervous. She decided to attack first, and dashed to the right, attempting to jump up onto a tall crate. She was able to pull herself up, and looked down on the boy. Now he seemed determined to beat her. Jaxon squinted up at this girl he was facing, Sam. He'd heard she was really good, but he knew he would beat her. He watched as she jumped up on the crate, letting her move first, to be fair. He readied himself- it was sometimes hard to attack, as his partial weapon form was a javelin sticking out of the top of his head, but he knew with training he could get better and better at attacking with it. Sam yelled, jumping down from the crate, aiming to pin Jaxon, and possibly strike him with her blade-arm. Jaxon grunted as Sam fell on him. Her bladed arm cut his leg- the wound wasn't deep though, he'd live. Jaxon moved his head, aiming to stab Sam's hand to distract her. Sam cried out as the javelin went almost all the way through her hand. It hurt like fire, all the way up her arm. At least it was her left arm. Sam knew Jaxon was doing this to try to distract her, and possibly give her a worse wound or at least get up. That wasn't going to happen though. Sam aimed a punch at Jaxon, and hoped she'd slice at his nose in the process of hitting him. Jaxon had no way to block Sam. He clenched his teeth as he was punched in the face, and his nose bled from the cut he was given from Sam's bladed arm. His leg started to hurt more than it had originally, like agony, and he screamed. Then he knew he couldn't go on, and needed medicine. Jaxon surrendered to Sam.
(Jaxon is not a real character in the roleplay, I just needed something to use as an example lol)
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Post by Rylux on Apr 14, 2014 22:17:52 GMT -5
Alright let’s get started Gender: Just put Female Partner: Just put none. Don’t put a person without asking Appearance: First this needs to be at least 200 words, more is better. -Don’t add (Edits) just make the edits to the appearance Height/Weight: She is severely underweight. Please up her weight to at least 124lbs. Fighting Style: Remove the example, it adds nothing to her fighting style and is very unlikely. Personality: Firstly don’t use first person tense. This needs to be at least 300 words You explain more about her appearance, interest, and history than you actually explain about her personality. You can be flavorful and still be descriptive. Weapon Form: You need to describe her weapon form. The picture is nice and all but you still need to actually describe the weapon itself. Partial Form: Ether post a picture or don’t, saying you will doesn’t help describe what this looks like. You need to describe the transformation well enough for people to know what you are talking about. Strengths/Weaknesses: What does muscular for a girl mean? Is she physically strong? If so just put that. What do you mean by swift? Does she have quick reflexes? Getting hot-headed is not a weakness Being clumsy is not a weakness Please have a balance 3/3 combat strengths and weaknesses History: Firstly, this needs to be at least 300 words and ideally more Do not add note outside of the history, the history itself should explain everything -Don’t use first person -It is Shibusen not DWMA -Where did she live before coming to the school? -How old was she when she discovered her weapon abilities? -Why does her dad have friends in Shibusen? Did he go there? -She would not be brought to Shibusen just because she was a weapon. From how its worded it seems she was very young when this happened and would not go to the school. -What about her mother and brother you mention? -Shibusen does not just pick up kids. She would not be able to go until she was at least 13 as it is a high school. -Who in her family had weapon blood? -What about her life before Shibusen? -Where does she live in Death City? I would assume the dorms if she could only barely afford to go to the school RP Sample: This is not how you color code. This is obnoxious and hard to read. Only color what is spoken for simplicity. -You don’t need to mention that Jaxon is an npc, that’s implied since you only play your character. -A javelin sticking out of someone’s head is not a possible partial form. -You switch between Jaxon and Sam’s perspective. This should only be in Sam’s like an actual post -They seem to be fighting really rough for a spar which wouldn’t happen as teachers observe battles -She wouldn’t have a reputation of being really good as she would have just reached the school because they would not accept her as a child Extra: A face claim is a character from a series that looks like yours and is used by the player to show a representation of their character. -Read the rules and character rules, you are missing something -Your account name must match that of your character
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Post by Deleted on Apr 15, 2014 9:02:57 GMT -5
I'm sorry this was so messed up, I was doing it really late at night. I will fix this as soon as I have time, I am catching up on homework, I've been sick a lot lately and am today too.
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