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Post by Deleted on Jun 8, 2013 1:00:40 GMT -5
Xing'Qai; Fon;Meister
Name: Fon Xing'Qai
Nickname: Name’s they go by
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Race: Meister
Position: Student
Class: One-star
Partner: None
A Strong Body
Picture: Appearance: Fon has medium length, wild curly hair tied into a skinny braid. His skin is light with just a hint of color and his eyes are chestnut brown. He is fairly handsome for a Asian. He stands at 5 ft 11 in, which is tall for someone in his family. When shirtless Fon's body is lean and muscular, radiating a sense of power. Fon usually weres red or blue clothing, whenever he is at home he wears a red oriental outfit.
Along his shoulder and back is a skinny tattoo of an eastern dragon.
Height: 5 feet 11 inches
Weight: 144 lbs.
Fighting Style: Fon is in love with martial arts. He uses his families style of Southern kung fu. He applies quick explosive punches, and short snapping kicks. He overwhelms weaker enemies in a combination of attacks, he utilizes feints grabs locks and throws effectively. He is very fast and exploits his oponents openings, in clever ways. He loves to switch scenarios that he is put in by his oponents, for instance if hes overwhelmed by brutal strength he would attack his oponent in the same way he was.
Fon is able to use a sword, though doesn't like it, his sword style is graceful and uniform, however he like close physical fighting and would mix in elbow strikes and knees with his swordsmanship.
Personality: Fon is easygoing and wild, some might even say care free. He is light hearted and cares for little over fighting. However when he is disrespected, or his family is he takes offence becomes angered easily and is prone to violence. In a way this makes him immature, because he considers a lot of things disrespectful. His pride and ego are like balloons, and he only has insecurities about his own strength.
Fon has a kingly complex aswell, he feels as if he should always act like how he feels is a perfect leader. Fons view of a perfect leader however is himself. Fon likes people that are fun and easy to talk to, He admires girls that speak their minds. Fon is forgiving, whether this is due to his nature or his adhd is a mystery however.
Fon has a sadistic side in battle, he enjoys inflicting the same amount of pain on his enemies they inflicted on him. He gets angry, and frustrated and will flip scenarios on his oponents to the point to were he defeats them physically and mentally. Fon also has a knack to be spiteful, if someone deeply angered him he would destroy them emotionally somehow. Despite this Fon is usually sleeping or training, he doesn't insult people at random and he even compliments his oponents. In short Fon is a great guy until you piss him off, when he is agitated he tends to take things too far.
Inside the Soul
Weapon form: (Weapons only)What is the character’s full weapon form? Please describe what it is and what they look like.
Partial Form:(Weapons only) What is your character’s partial form? Please explain what it is and how it forms for them.
Abilities: Fon has the ability soul purge. He usually begins a solid combination of strikes to stun his oponent then he concentrates and quickly uses Soul Purge. His soul purge emits a Cyan blue color, he strikes trying to peirce his oponent, then he activates it his hand sparks blue and sends his wavelength rushing through and out of his enemy.
Resonances:If you have a partner and resonance list and give a brief description of it/them here.
Out of your Mind
Strengths: Fast, Versatile and fluent in martial arts, Instinctive
Weaknesses: Rash, hot headed, arrogant
Hobbies:Training, playing instruments and watching clouds
Likes: Martial Arts, books, tv, girls with a strong will
Dislikes: Cowards, Damsels, roaches, traitors
Aspirations: Become the strongest and most respected fighter and Martial Artist.
History: Fon spent his early life in the temple, sweeping up the floor , peeping on the shrine maidens and meditating. His father was a meister and was out frequently, he didnt meet the man until he was in the second grade. Before Fon started school his mother sent him to live with his grand father whom taught him his families martial arts. He fell in love with it and was obsessed with martial arts.
He was a quiet and nice kid when he started school, then his father made it home. His father was impressed by Fons skill and complimented him, Fon fell in love with his father's approval. Thats when his behavior started changing, he got in more fights at school, and wouldn't stop fighting until his oponent was humiliated. This worsened over time. Fon nearly was always suspended from school and he never cared for grades.
Fon's father went to America on a mission, however his time, he didn't come back. His father died fighting a kishin egg, and it crushed Fon. He needed to blame it on someone and he had no one to blame. He cursed his father's name, blamed it on him saying he was too weak. In Fon's mind his dad was the greatest, his mentor, motivation and ambition. Having all that ripped away made his pride and insecurities strong, he wouldnt allow himself or anyone else to think he was weak. He would show everyone he was strong and would become stronger than his father, so he moved to Nevada and enrolled in the DWMA.
Extra Notes: Fon's theme song is "Core pride" by Uverworld
Behind the strings
Alias: I go by jarod rockky j-roc or dayz-sama
Other characters: None yet
Face Claim: Fon Katekyo Hitman Reborn
RP "Man I can't believe they're making me do this. I just got here and a 3 paragraph report!" Fon moaned to himself. He leaned his head back in his chair. He hadn't even known what a paragraph was. He knew it had to be like 68 sentences though. "I'll just do some baby ones", Fon thought.He began writing about fighting. He wrote a 4 word sentence on making a fist. Then another on how to throw a punch and why proper punching was important. "Then, I'll talk about kicks and throws an-" Fon started staring into space. He had lost his train of though, no it had ran from him. He climbed out the window of his apartment and , shimmied down the gutter. His feet hit grass and he smiled. "Fresh Air!", he shouted his arms in the air. He continued forward, off to train, only having wrote 63 sentences on fighting.
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Post by Rylux on Jun 8, 2013 21:36:59 GMT -5
Alright let’s see here. Firstly you can not have the same name as your face claim, either change Fon or change your FC Appearance: This needs to be expanded a lot to reach the 250 word minimum. Weight: He is underweight and unless you want to incorporate that into his character please increase his weight to at least 154lbs Remove the weapon sections from the profile Strengths/Weaknesses: Currently he has two viable strengths and no weaknesses. Please balance this with 3/3. Here is a helpful guide for distinguishing weaknesses from disadvantages hereHistory:- Include how he discovered his meister powers -Change DWMA to Shibusen as we follow the manga -Include where he is from, I assume China but be more specific then that -Add more details. His history is very basic and could use more information to flesh it out. (how did he get to Shibusen? More details on his personality change. Does he actually have ADHD? If so expand upon it. Things like that.) Rp Sample: Please organize this to be like a normal post. Also use a color to distinguish his talking (generally the color of one’s soul is used). Also make this at least 250 words like an average post. Extra: Please read the rules and character rules, you are missing something that must be included in the profile
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