Sora heart [Meister]

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Heart; Sora ;Meister

Name: Sora Heart


Nickname: Sora


Age: 17


Gender: Female



Race: Meister



Position: Student



Class: NOT


Partner: Yet to get one


A Strong Body



Picture:


Appearance: Sora is a fair skinned, freckle teen with long curled shocking red hair
that when straight or wet reaches the small of her back. Sora has one left green eyes and a right bright blue eye, these are hidden behind large glasses, she is tall and lean with a constant smile.

Sora has a fair few scars from trying to train herself and only when she got her fifth scar did she realise it would be better to become a student and learn properly. Although it is often hidden behind her glasses and hair she had a sweet, welcoming face that makes her easy to approach


Height: 5.6


Weight: 135


Fighting Style: Sora rushes in low and quick, dodging the hits thrown at you and deals as much damage as quickly as she can as fast as she can to try and minimize damage or casualties 


Personality: Sora can be a bit of a loner when she is in a large group of people she doesn't know. The teen prefers to sit in the back of the class by herself when she doesn't have anyone to talk to which is quite often. It takes a while for her to warm up to anyone and even before that she is always very reluctant to talk to others first.

Deep down, when you get to know her, Sora is a sweet, cheerful teen who always does her best to look on the bright side of life and help those who need it. She believes that if you do good, good with be done for you, even though that hasn't really shown much in her life.

Sora can be quick tempered when faced with someone being judgemental, unfair or unjust and is not afraid to give them a piece of her mind. Sora will stick up for her friends but not herself and will always try to calm things down before she gets involved completely and starting a fist fight


Inside the Soul






Abilities: Can not use either as of yet


Resonances:---


Out of your Mind



Strengths: Sora is Quick, smart and strong


Weaknesses: Sora can be complacent, reckless and easily angered


Hobbies: Sora loves doing anything crafty such as sewing, doing origami and writing. She also loves to read and go on walks as well as spend time with her friends


Likes: Sora loves Butterflies, a good book, helping others and solving puzzles


Dislikes: Sora hates judgemental people, spiders, Being in small dark places and being useless


Aspirations: Be the best Meister she can be and help as many as possible


History: Sora was the daughter of a rich, well known weapon/meister family. She grew up being expected to be perfect at being a meister but no matter how many partners her parents found her or how many hours of training she put in there was just now way she could seem to find a partner to fit with.

Sora ran away when she was 15, she believed her parents crushing exceptions and constant pushing was the reason she couldn't get to grips with being a Meister but after a year of training by herself and trying her best with the few weapons that agreed to work with her she just couldn't do it.

The now 17 year old had decided on her birthday that she would join the DWMA and try her best to get a good partner so she could prove to her parents that you didn't need money to buy everything for you. Sora promised herself she was going to work hard, find a partner and be the very best she could be


Extra Notes: None


Behind the strings



Alias: Soraheart


Other characters: None


Face Claim: None


RP Sample: Sora chewed her bottom lip as she stared up at the large school she would be starting at, she had recently come to the city and started at the academy that week. The teen had just finished moving in to her new, small flat and had decided to take a stroll to get to know the city.

Sora had to admit as she looked at the building, it was pretty impressive and very symmetrical "So I guess the rumours are true" she muttered to herself. She had heard the son of Death, the head master, was a bit of a symmetry nut. The red head gave a laugh as she shook her head and continued down the street of shops "this is gonna be a good year, I can just tell" she smiled at the idea

Sora couldn't stop the excitement that rose within her at the thought of all the things she would be learning and the skills she would gain at the school, the possibilities really were endless for her and she wasn't sure if she should be scared by that, not that she ever really cared what she should or shouldn't be

[Rylux]

Alright you have a good start here but a few things need to be worked on.

Firstly please use the proper template, just copy the code in the box and work from there

Appearance: Expand upon this, reach at least 200 words. Describe the scars she has, where are they? What do they look like? So on. Also describe what sort of clothes she wears. Does she have different outfits for different occasions? Anything special she wears? Little details like these help to really add to the character.

Fighting Style: With her history I would expect her to have some sort of training so expand upon this. Was she taught a certain style of fighting? At the least describe what she attacks with (fist, elbows, legs, etc.)

Personality: This looks good but should be expanded some more. I’d like to see at least 250 words for this section but would prefer closer to 300 or more.

Strengths/Weaknesses: Your strengths look good but none of your weaknesses work out. This is a common problem so I’ll give some examples. What we are looking for are combat weaknesses, things that will be a detriment to her on a mission or fighting a kishin. She wears glasses so a simple one would be making her near sighted or something so she needs them. You already said she was quick and strong so maybe say her reflexes are slow, or that she lacks flexibility, perhaps even poor balance.

History: To start this I want more, at least 300 words for this but more is certainly better. She has 17 years of life to be explained upon, that should provide plenty to write about.
-Please include where she is from.
-If she is from a weapon/meister family why would they think she would be a meister and not a weapon? She could even be a dud for all they know and have no potential to be a meister.
-How would they know she even had the potential to be a meister without her showing and signs? This can be explained by her being able to communicate spiritually with a weapon.
-Where would her parents find multiple weapons willing to partner with her if not from the school?
-What did she do when she ran away? Where did she go? How did she live?
-How did she train on her own?
-What weapons would work with her? If she wasn’t compatible with them wielding them would be impossible or terribly exhausting in the best case.
-It’s not DWMA, the name of the school is Shibusen. Fix this.
-How would she join Shibusen? If she has no skill as a meister there is no reason to accept her. I can see her getting in with help from her parents but if she ran away she wouldn’t have this.
-Depending on where she lived how did she even get to Shibusen? It is a city in Nevada surrounded by a desert, and travel options for a runaway aren’t that plentiful.
-You mention money and sweep over this but I feel it could be expanded upon. It seems there is more to her relationship with her parents than just them wanting her to be a meister.

RP Sample: This needs to be at least 250 words. Treat this like a post you would make on the site so it needs to hit the minimum word count
-It wouldn’t be the son of Death, Kidd is Shinigami now and has been for a year so any new students would know him as such.
-Just a tip. I suggest using a color for your text as it makes what is said easier to see and helps to differentiate characters in threads.

Extra: Please add the passwords to your profile somewhere.
-You mention she has heterochromia. What does she think of this? Even in the world of soul eater people exhibiting heterochromia is still a rare thing.
-Please change your display name to match that of the character.