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Post by leonkaminski on Sept 1, 2015 9:04:46 GMT -5
Last Name; First Name;Race
Name: Leon Kaminski
Nickname: Eyeleak (An uncreative nickname used to bully him when he was little)
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Race: Meister
Position: Student
Class: One Star but keeps asking to be moved to NOT because he lacks self-confidence
Partner: No-one yet
A Strong Body
Picture:
Appearance: He has silvery-greyish hair and greyish eyes, his akin is quite pale but not unhealthily so. His skin is very smooth and clear of pretty much any blemishes. He’s grown his hair long and low in an attempt to cover as much of his face as possible, he is usually embarrassed looking with red cheeks. His hair often falls in front of his left eye and he has to blow it out of the way.
He is very skinny and small physically and is often a pushover because of this fact. He has a few small scars along his back and shoulders as well. (I’m not sure if this is quite justifiable as too paragraphs, I will try and add more if need be.)
Height: 5’6”
Weight: 85lbs
Fighting Style: He isn’t skilled in any fighting style and mostly just swings (or shoots) and hopes for the best.
Personality: He is incredibly shy, and becomes almost incapable of speech when talking to people (especially girls) and his voice often trails off mid-speech and turns into a mumble. He cannot under any circumstances speak in front of a crowd; he tried once and fainted on his way to the podium. He often attempts to keep to himself, though tries small talk to avoid being rude if the need arises. He is very easy to scare.
He could easily be described as a pushover; he does whatever he can to try to avoid conflict though it has very rarely worked. He always puts himself before others and this usually winds up in him getting hurt. He is slow to trust anyone and tries not to let anyone get to close, but one of his greatest fears is being hated by anyone. Despite his age he can end up crying very easily when stressed and when this happens usually tries to flee the scene before anyone sees him. He always acts under the assumption that anyone talking to him is just looking for a quick chat and nothing more and he holds no confidence in his own abilities.
Inside the Soul
Abilities: He can use the Soul Perception but rather than seeing them, it allows him to hear them, making it very difficult to focus on just one, he tries not to accidentally study anyone’s soul too hard so it is often just annoying white noise in the back of his mind.
Resonances: (Will add when I get a partner.) Out of your Mind
Strengths: -Agile -Strategic -Intelligent
Weaknesses: -Doesn’t respond well to pressure -Physically Weak -Easily Intimidated
Hobbies: He enjoys drawing, writing and playing guitar. He has shown nobody any of these things.
Likes: - Doodling - Guitar - Short conversations - Baking
Dislikes: - Crowds - Public Speaking - Birds - Bullies
Aspirations: He wants a world where everyone can be happy without hurting each other.
History: Leon lived an average childhood despite being born into a poor family, Money never seemed to be an issues because no matter what he and his family always managed to smile, and that was enough for him. Yet all good things must come to an end, and when Leon was four the banks demanded his family pay their debts with interest and his parents could no longer afford to support him, and so he was sent to his local orphanage, the last thing he saw was his Mother’s eyes tearing up before he was too far away to see them.
He began his life at the Orphanage the next day, at the time he was the youngest kid there, and so no-one really wanted to associate with him. None of them wanted to be the ‘Weirdo who hangs out with the little kid.’ So he was mostly by himself, so he stuck to reading books and drawing. He always got bullied at that orphanage, everyone has something they wanted to say to him, and some of them decided to say it in ways other than words. Yet he always laughed it off as a bit of good-natured hazing before he was worthy to be their friend.
Those ‘hazings’ lasted his entire six years at the orphanage. He was ten years old when he started hearing ‘voices’ in the back of his mind. He kept trying to shrug it off as something that happened to everyone but couldn’t quite shake the feeling that maybe… just maybe he was going insane. These voices turned out to be the first traces of his Soul Perception.
He learnt about the academy when he was 11 by whispers and rumours being passed around by the Orphanages’ caretakers, from what he heard it seemed the academy may know about what he was hearing and could help, and so, the day he turned 15, he left the orphanage to join Shibusen.
Extra Notes: He has an eye infection and his eye occasionally leaks blood when he is stressed, hence the nickname.
Behind the strings
Alias: Lord Kawaii, The Prophet of Asebi
Other characters: None yet Face Claim: Not sure, if anyone knows it please tell me. RP Sample: Leon stepped through the gates and breathed in the new air that was everywhere in this academy. “I don’t know what it’s going to be like here, but I hope everyone is nice.” He smiled to himself, a few stray hairs flopping in front of his eye. He blew them out of the way and continued forward, becoming less and less sure of himself as he saw more and more people ‘oh geez’ he thought ‘Maybe this was a bad idea after all, maybe I should go back and…’ No, he’d made a decision to come here and he knew he didn’t want to return to the orphanage. Still…it was a lot of people, and it was very noisy.
He slowly walked through the building, making sure he didn’t draw too much attention to himself; luckily for him everyone seemed to already be involved in conversations with other students. “Looks like I’ll be ok for now.” He mumbled to himself, relaxing slightly and taking in the sights.
‘Classrooms, Faculty, Nurses office, teachers lounge, cool.’ He thought to himself lifting his bag up his shoulder a bit more, taking mental note of the locations of each place. He took in the sights from a nearby balcony. “This sure is a nice place.” He smiled, looking around a bit. “But now I just need to find out who can help me with this voice thing.”
makeouts sloppy
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Post by Rylux on Sept 4, 2015 20:11:22 GMT -5
This is going to need a bit of work so let’s start from the top First fill out the template properly with the names/race at the top Nickname: This doesn’t sound uncreative or like a nickname he would want to be called Class: If he is a one star meister he is capable of fighting, he would need to prove as much before being placed there Appearance: This should be at least 200 words Height/Weight: He is incredibly underweight. For his height he should be between 139 and 151 lbs. Fighting Style: You need more for this. If he is forced to fight what does he do? Look around at other profiles, there are plenty of unskilled fighters to look at. Personality: This should be at least 300 words. -Fainting from trying to speak in front of a crowd seems to be more than shyness and some serious condition. Soul Perception: At his level soul perception would be something he needs to consciously activate so it would not be distracting. He would also be unable to study much of anything from a person’s souls aside from whether or not they were a human or kishin egg. I suggest sticking with the standard sight soul perception. Weaknesses/Strengths: Your strengths are fine but physically weak is the only weakness that counts. Please replace the other two with other weaknesses. History: -Where is he from? –Why is he an orphan? He has parents and the situation for his removal seems like a stretch. It seems like he is an orphan just to be one and as such shouldn’t be. -Why was he bullied? He seems generally unassuming in any way so I find it hard to believe ‘everyone had something to say to him’ -Soul perception wouldn’t work that way so there is no reason for him to go to Shibusen. -Why would he wait until he was 15 to go when he could at the age of 13? -Shibusen is obvious about what they do. Why would he go to a school where he would have to fight monsters when he has every choice not to? -How did he get to Shibusen? He would need to be enrolled by an adult as well as have the money and means to get to the school. Extra Notes: The only thing I found that would cause his eye to bleed was a vein blockage that could cause vision loss. So a bit more serious than an infection. As this doesn’t make sense remove it. Face Claim: This is Shion from No. 6 RP Sample: –This needs to be at least 250 words, like an actual post -Please use a color to show speech -Shibusen does not exist to help meisters as their abilities do not act like you described. He would know that he was not there to be helped but to be trained. Extra: Please change your account name to that of your character. Work on these things and he should be good to go.
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Post by leonkaminski on Sept 4, 2015 20:15:29 GMT -5
Ok
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