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Post by Yami Suta on Dec 18, 2015 18:51:33 GMT -5
Suta; Yami;Human
Name: Yami Suta
Nickname: Dark, Shadow,
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Race: Meister
Position: Student
Class: One Star Meister
Partner: none currently
A Strong Body
Appearance: Yami is of average height and a lean build, which you would expect from an assassin meister. His hair is spikey (arguably sloppy) and a metallic blue. His eyes are a golden yellow, that seem to glow a bit. He also has a scar over his right eye.
He wears a rather strange outfit on missions, mostly dark colors that cover most of his skin, with openings in certain areas to not restrict movement. He carried his own katanna, which has a very decorative handle and sheathe. The blade is a dark steel and very sharp.
Height: 5'9
Weight: 190 lbs.
Fighting Style: Yami sticks to the rules of the assassin in combat most of the time. Remaining quiet and not attacking until there is an opening. He is especially careful about the last part as he has yet to get a weapon power and only uses a katana. His Rules of the Assassin
Do it fast, quickly, and silently. Aim for vital points and weak spots. Anything goes, this is assassination. When forced to fight one on one and unable to fight stealthily, he'll use speed and still aim for vital areas. If he cann't hit the vitals easily, he'll try and cut tendons and build up minor cuts over time.
Personality: His personality varies from situation. When with friends, he prefers to let loose and prank, and have fun. Off of missions he prefers to either train, make friends, have fun, or train. He is the fun man who is fun-loving laugh everything off, when off of missions or on missions with friends, and the serious assassin when on lone missions.
When around Death he is a very much so business man, not joking or doing anything that doesn't have to do with the mission. On lone missions he follows the three rules of being as assassin, and prefers to end the fight quickly. He is very serious when he is training, even doing activities that seem to have nothing to do with swordsmanship to improve his abilities.
Yami enjoys drawing and painting. He originally did these as a way to sharpen his senses when in combat but it grew on him as he continued to do it. He also likes drawing things in other art styles. An example is he draws manga characters realistically, and real people in warm colors only, stuff like that. He also practices penmanship, y, rock gardening, landscape painting, and of course sparing.
Inside the Soul
Abilities: Soul purge. Yami uses this ability like Stien, multiple small hits rather than one big one. His looks a bit like a shadow is wrapping around his fist/whatever is hitting you.
Resonances: He has none currently, but if the resonance changes the appearance of the weapon, any points or edges may become like the end of his scarf and battle skirt. (like Spirit gaining stitches when he resonates with Stein, or Kid's cannon resonance getting skulls on the sides.)
Out of your Mind
Strengths: Very Fast High Stamina Psychologically Strong Hearing is improved
Weaknesses: not physically strong low combat experience slower reflexes
Hobbies: Pranking, training, hanging out, drawing
Likes: drawing, training, socializing, spars
Dislikes: friends in pain, seafood (ironic since he is partially Japanese), bitter flavors, traitors
Aspirations: make a death scythe and rid the world of kishin eggs.
History: Yami Suta was born 17 years ago and even as a kid had a love for combat and defending people. As such he wanted to stand up for others and protect them and himself. As a kid, he would often get in many fights with neighborhood bullies because of him standing up for other kids. Eventually, at the age of 12, he signed up for martial arts training.
Yami Suta was trained in one of the many dojos of a well known martial artist clan. Sadly, before completing his training, the clan was killed. Furious by the massacre of his teachers, he sought revenge on Shibusen. Soon though, in a fight with a man named Hademaru, he learned the the clan had become 90% kishin eggs (and those there weren't were close), and where a threat. After calming down and thinking clearly (as he had been very close to being consumed by madness at the time), he was unsure what to do with his life. The student he had met, Hademaru, tried to stay and help him with the decisions.
After much debating on what to do with his life, being a half trained fighter and being only average at everything else, Hade invited him to Shibusen, which Yami reluctantly excepted. He started training there in, of course, NOT class. He trained to be an assassin meister. He wielded a sword gifted to him from Hademaru. He would spend a full year there before finally showing enough skill to become a One Star Meister.
More recently, he's lessened his training, though he still does it every other day. He has focused more on socializing, as he is not only in a new area and knows fewer people, but also because he will be needing a partner soon. He had heard rumors that some kishin eggs were so durable that regular weapons cann't hurt them. He also has a recent want to make a death scythe, preferably before Hademaru.
Extra Notes: Hademaru was another characters on the site he is from that he has a close bond with, thus why his name is brought up so much. also: makeouts
Behind the strings
Alias: Belac
Other characters: none yet, but several planned :3
Face Claim: none.
RP Sample:
It was a dark, yet bright night. The wind blew lightly, causing the leaves of the forest to rustle constantly. The forest was rather noisey, sounds of nocturnal animals hunting in the night. The stars, though not visible through the canopy, were bright tonight, and rather beautiful. However for Yami, he didn't have time to admire the scenery, only keep an eye on it.
He was waiting, watching, keeping an eye, and ear, our for anything. There had been many a killing here, and it was possible that it was a kishin egg, do to no souls ever being found. He listened and heard two foot steps. One was heavier than the other, and the lighter one was followed by many sounds a bit higher than it, like branches being moved. One was wide and heavy, the other tall and thin, from what the sounds were telling him. As he looked, he saw two men, both in suits, but wearing masks. They were the sad and happy masks you saw in a children's art class, and their outfits suggested they were doing some business, likely illegal.
He watched as a third man walked in. He had been so focused on the others that he didn't even notice him. The man was tall and thin, and all facial features were gone, not even eyes. This guy was obviously a kishin egg. His mouth moved, but Yami didn't hear anything. The other two certainly did though. They seemed rather intimated, but the smaller one kept calm. "So..." He said as he took out a small box. "In here you will find the item. It should help find your...interests." As the faceless man reached for it, the man took his hand away. "Na-ah-ah. Our Item first." He said in a singy song voice. The faceless man made another noise but then sprouted six more arms, each holding a human soul. "Perfect." the fat one said. This was were he had to end it. As the smaller two reached for the souls, Yami jumped out of the tree. Do to the angle and direction of his cut, he slit the taller one's throat and leave a huge cut on the shorter one's chest. As the other fell back, he quickly thrusted the blade into his chest, killing him, leaving two kishin egg souls.
Right after he pulled out the blade, the faceless man punched him into a tree, before following with many attacks. While Yami managed to stop from vital places getting hit, his legs, arms, and forehead got hit a lot. He wasn't good on the defensive, especially when the opponent had multiple arms. He did a few short small jumps back, before getting ready to go on the offensive. When the other man, who was equally fast, came at him, Yami slices at two tendons on two arms, making it so he wasn't able to bend them. The other six however were gonna be a problem. He barely avoided five, but one hit him square across the jaw. He grunted, but grabbed the hand and shoved his blade through the opening in the wrist and into the ground. He jumped ontop of the blade and resonated with himself. As he did shadows seemed to appear around his fists as he punched the faceless man five times, one in the face, twice in the ribs, once in the gut, and one to one of his ears.
The Faceless man roared in anger, and though Yami was more resilient against madness and fear inspiring attacks than most, he could still feel a small amount of fear from the roar. He quickly pulled out his blade and began on the retreat. He ran as the faceless man chased slowed down from its two non cooperating arms, but still able to keep up. Yami knew what to do, he darted up a tree to his right, and kept on moving, but staying on the faceless man's right side. That was where he had hit his ear, and the faceless mans ear would be ringing after a direct soul wavelength hit. As he snuck by, the faceless man was tearing apart random trees trying to find him. He got ready, waiting, for the man to leave an opening, and he took it. However, just when he thought it was over, he felt a sudden pain in his stomach.
He hadn't realized that in looking for the opening in the last attack that he had attacked the creature from the left. It punched him in the stomach with four arms, grabbed him with two and then slammed him into the ground. The faceless man let out a low growl of anger, and raised the other four arms to attack. Then Yami did a reverse thrust into hits chest (fancy talk for stabbing behind you) causing enough pain for the faceless man to release his grip and for Yami to hit him with a Soul Purge kick to the groin. As the faceless man fell he pulled out his blade and then cut its throat. Finally the faceless thing died and left behind a kishin egg soul. Yami stood up, panting, barely able to hold up his sword. He sheathed it, and took the soul. He walked slowly back to were the kishin eggs had met. He stored the three kishin egg souls in his outfit while taking the pure souls and bringing them straight to Shinigami-Sama. He hoped none of his other missions would be like this one had been.
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Post by Rylux on Dec 19, 2015 23:44:38 GMT -5
Alright let’s just jump into this. Appearance: This needs to be at least 200 words. -His eyes can’t glow -He can’t have his own katana -What does he wear not on missions? Weight: For his height you are looking for a target of 157, with the ideal range between 148 and 160. Fighting Style: -Don’t bother with the spoiler tag, just put the information there. -Remove the parts with the katana and include how he would fight unarmed -If he uses assassination instead of martial arts that should be a more prominent part of his character/history -You can include how he fights with weapons but there must be enough without them to describe how he fights as there is no guarantee he will have those weapons to fight with Personality: –This should be at least 300 words -The last paragraph is less personality and more hobbies. -Include how he is around people he doesn’t know, in class, alone. Also go into more detail with each. Soul Purge: -His will look like soul colored electricity like everyone else’s, not shadows. -Do not use Stein as a reference, describe how it is without comparing it to someone else. -A note, this will be at the weakest level as he is untrained Resonances: Remove this until you actually gain a resonance. Every resonance is different and comes from both members so these ideas may not come to fruition Strengths/Weaknesses: -How is his hearing improved? -You need to remove one strength so these are balanced -If he would often get into many fights he would not be inexperienced to combat Dislikes: The fact that he is Japanese should be more than a small note in dislikes History: – Where was he born? - Martial arts is a wide category of different fighting styles and the specific one should be mentioned. - If the clan was kishin eggs they would have just killed him instead of training him. - The idea of a clan of kishin eggs being destroyed by Shibusen is right out the anime so its not going to work in his history. -Before going on a revenge trip why didn’t his parents just take him away? -To go to Shibusen he would need to show promise as a meister through a soul ability -If he’s been in Shibusen for a year he isn’t really in a new area -Why did he choose to become an assassin when he had no prior affiliation with assassination? -All kishin eggs need to be killed by a demon weapon, normal weapons are useless against them -If he’s only had a year of training is assassination he would be far more inept than his rp sample makes him out to be Extra Notes: As this is not that site this does not need to be mentioned. Him having a connection with a student is fine but that student themselves is irrelevant RP Sample: -Starting things off with a contradiction is generally not a good idea -Jumping does not equate to slashing, if he attacked that should be said -If he was punched into a tree would the tree not stop him from jumping back? -If he was taking punches to the forehead he’s going to be disoriented for a moment after -If the kishin egg is strong enough to tear apart trees he is not ok after getting hit multiple times -You don’t need to explain what a reverse thrust is, unless the technique is especially complex just saying what it is works fine -Would he not have been slammed into the ground on his back? Making it so he would need to thrust in front of him? -At his level he can probably only soul purge through his hands -There are some flaws in this as is. An rp sample should be something that has or could realistically happen, what you have could not. An unpartnered student could not kill one kishin egg, let alone three, nor would they even be sent on a mission. Not to mention after that fight he would not get up and walk away panting, he was soundly beaten at best. This should show how the character is and help you get a feel for them, not simply highlight how well they fight. Extra: -At the top race should be meister -Neither of those nicknames seem like something someone would actually call him -For speech it is common to use text colors to differentiate it from the other writing -Please look this over for spelling and grammar errors Overall you have a solid base for a character. All he needs is less focus on him fighting and more on him as a character as a whole
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