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Post by Deleted on Sept 1, 2014 21:53:37 GMT -5
Silvio; Axel; Meister
Name: Axel Silvio Nickname: Age: 17 Gender: Male Race: Meister Position: Student Class: One Star Partner: N/A
A Strong Body Picture: Here Here2
Appearance: Axel is a bit on the leaner side of the physical diagram. His height, mixed with the well-toned, but not by any means, muscular. His body has been toned from combat, and rigorious running exercises, though it is obvious he has not focused on increasing his physical strength. His skin is, not pale, but it is obvious that he does not spend a lot of time with his skin exposed to the sun. For the most part his complextion is fair, here and there on his torso and back one can find a fading scar or two, evidence of the skirmishes he has undergone since his enrollment. His face is quie sharp, though few people notice, as their eyes are draw to either his hair or eyes. A deep red, Axel's hair hangs down to his eyes, but manages to not impair his ability to see. His burnt orange eyes seemed to be constantly half closed, as if from boredom or lack of interest in anything that is going on around him.
A good word to describe Axel's style of dress is outdated. His usual dress is not something you can miss as he draws attention with the red parasol that he carries around with him everywhere. With this, he also wears a black jacket, coming halfway down his thigh, with a shoulder cape attatched to it and held closed with a small silver chain. Either sleeve of the jack is held closed by a pair of cufflinks in the shape of the Shinigami's iconic mask. With this he wears a sleevless, white shirt with a high collar pressed against his neck. The hem of the shirt is bordered withe a red line, roughly an inch thick, and has a split in the center of it the goes to just below his belt. To top it off, he wears a pair of black slacks, held by a then black belt with a white buckle, also the Shinigami's Mask, and then a pair of black shoes.
Height: 6 ft Weight: 170 lbs
Fighting Style: Axel's style of fighting is one that is, unfortunately, lacking in raw power. A lack of combat training has left him with only his own agility, wit and the use of his Soul Purge. He doesn't know any fancy styled moves, nor any special kung-fu counters. So, Axel focuses on out-manuvering his foes, keeping them from landing a strike, and hitting fast, channeling the use of his Soul Purge to make of for his lacking in training. Now this does not mean he cannot fight, as he quite often has too, it simply means that he only has his own gut to go off of when going toe-to-toe with someone. Though this is usually quite the disadvantage when going against someone who is trained in a specific martial art, Axel is able to use to to his advantage as well. Since he is not trained, he is a novice, making his moves wild and unpredictable. This creates problems when the enemy relies on trying to predict their opponents next move.
Instead of direction confrontation, Axel will usually try to manuever the enemy into a position that will most benefit himself. Using speed with his intellect, he an usually avoid an enemies attacks quite well. It is all about waiting for the right opporunity to strike, as he cannot go on the defensive very well due to his lack of strength.
Personality: Axel is fueled by his desires. Without a desire, or if the desire is not strong enough, he does not act. The desire to protect the weak is, perhaps, his strongest. Because of this he is often seen as abrasive and forward. He often puts himself into the center of a conflict or undesirable situation in order to "protect" another person, regardless of whether he knows them. A by product of this; Axel does not have a very wide range of friends, which does not really bother him. Take this and match it up with his tendency to get in another person's face if they are doing something that he dislikes, and you get the recipe for a violent conflict.
Unlike a lot of people who attend Shibusen, Axel does not believe in violence for the sake of violence. If one is to fight,than they should have a purpose to fuel their fighting spirit. Things like, to just get stronger, or to beat a specific person are not valid to him. However, even with a valid reason, he still holds a distaste for it. Because of this, he refrains from striking anyone with a closed fist, not unless he must fight to kill. Doing so allows him to control the conflict, oppose to actually being the conflict. This is not to get confused with a lack of resolve. Because no matter the situation, whether it be a small skirmish of a fight for his life, Axel will bend, but he will not break for any obsticale. Never give up, Never give in, Strategic retreat is ok.
Kind, and quite intelligent, it would seem like he would be the type of person that would love to be around large groups of people. Eccentric and ready to have fun. Despite this, Axel can honestly say he has no real desire to actively make friends. To force oneself into a social situation in an attempt to make some sort of bond seems slightly foolish. Friendship should be something that occurs naturally. If a bond is meant to exist, fate will ensure that bond is formed when it needs to be. Fate's Desire overpowers all others. To try and for something that does not fall within Fate's Desires is to bring upon misfortune.
Inside the Soul Abilities: Soul Purge - As Axel has no real desire to strike an indivdual, he does not utilize Soul Purge to enhance his blows, but, instead, uses it in replace of striking. The most common practice in using Soul Purge is channeling it into the target upon striking with a fist or palm. Axel channels his Soul Purge into the target by simply touching them with his hand instead of actually hitting them. This allows him to focus on quick movements as he only needs to make partial contact with his hand instead of a full blown strike. Using it as such, however, does take away from its damaging ability as it is not stacking upon the damage that would have been done with a blow from his hand, instead, relies solely on the damage the the Soul Purge itself, does.
When used, it does not create the static that many Meisters generate when using the Soul Purge. Instead, in it's place, an orange, quick moving mist appears flows from his hands instead.
Resonances:If you have a partner and resonance list and give a brief description of it/them here.
Out of your Mind Strengths: Quick Reflexs, Agile, High Stamina Weaknesses: Lack of Combat Skills, Low Endurance, Low Strength Hobbies: Axel is a wanderer, and enjoys to sketch. Likes: Apples, a good cup of tea, the sound of laughter, a good book Dislikes: Loud noises, arrogance, onions, the way English people say "saw."
Aspirations: At this time, Axel does not have any actually aspirations.
History: Born into a family that had never strived for any kind of greatness, Axel grew up with, remarkably, low expectations on what life was going to be like for him. As a chil, he was smaller, and weaker, than the other children. His brilliant red hair and orange eyes made him an easy target in the eyes of the bigger kids. Due to this, at an incredibly young age, he learned that the best thing to do was not always to stand up against the bullies, but it was sometimes necessary to run away, make a strategic retreat until things were more favorable for him. Of course, this merely made things worse, as the bigger kids began with their little taunts and names. Looking back, six, seven, and eight year olds were very well versed in the art of psychological warfare.
However, this did not deter Axel, it did not make him the typical frightened little boy, afraid of his own shadow. No, he would not be this steriotypical, bullied kid. This was because of his stories. From the moment he could read, his noes almost always remained between the pages of a book. He read of might beast, slew by the great hero. The underdog rising up to beat the odds when no one believed in them. Because of these stories, Axel knew that it was okay that he was not the strongest, or biggest kid around. All that mattered was for him to be who he was meant to be, which meant in this case, being the smarter and faster kid. With this thought held firm, he became more daring and outspoken against the bullies in the class. This did lead to many fights, but it also lead to the solution. Eventually the bullies began to calm down, and back off himself, and the other smaller children, because he would always come looking for them. Sure he didn't always when at his fights, but he was persistent and never backed down.
At the age of nine, himself, his father and his sister all moved out of small town Iowa, and into the city of Chicago because of his father's work. They settled into a suburb, where it was decent, but not snobbish. Though this was exciting, this led to its own problems, like a new school, which meant a new set of bullies. These ones were not as flexible as they were in Iowa, as they had not had anyone to stand against them. This led to many fights, most of which Axel lost, mostly due to numbers. It became apparent that standing against these kids was not going to work as well as it did against others. As he got older, the more he began to clash with the other kids. By the age of thirteen, he had to move through three schools due to the constant fighting. The last school, that school was where it all changed.
Having a knack for running away, Axel had found himself with the Cross-Country team as one of their long distance runners. Since he joined, he had not lost a single race, which gained him a good deal of school fame. This brought admirers, but also attracted those jealous of anyone's success. After training one day, Axel sat on one of the many benches along the side of the track, small towel around his neck, sweat dripping from his face. His hair and shirt were soaked in his hard work, and it made him shimmer in the now setting orange sun. It felt good, the tiredness that came from working the body, however, it was going to fade soon as his workout was about to get intense.
Axel's body suddenly jerked, launching him from his seat on the bench and into the air. At first, he wasn't even sure what was happening, and then he heard the sharp bang of metal striking metal. It took amount for him to get a good look at the cause, as he hit the ground and rolled into a crouching position. There were three boy stand by the bench, one of home was pulling back a metal pipe from the bench, the dent exactly where he had been sitting just a second ago. Another held a piece of wood, while the third had not weapon at all. He knew where they had gotten these, from under the bleachers were tons of just random bits of nothing seemed to gather. He had no time to ask questions, as the three vaulted over the bench and rushed him. There was no time to think only act, as he pushed himself to his feet, doing his best to evade their reckless swings.
Thanks to quick thinking, Axel did manage to get the idiot with the bit of wood, to clock the one with the pipe square in the head. Normally he would check to make sure the boy was still breathing, but he had no time to spare a thought for the unconcsious assalant. Jumping back to avoid another swing, Axel suddenly found himself being trapped, as he run directly into the boy without a weapon. Grabbing either arm and hoasting them up and back, Axel found himself unable to move, his limbs feeling like lead, and exhaustion from the running was finally taking its toll on him. Closing his eyes, he tried to gather his strength. Come on! Escape! My only Desire now is to Escape! Axel's line of thought was interrupted as he felt the boy behind him, suddenly ripped away from his body, free his hands. Opening his eyes, he turned and looked at the boy as he lie in the emerald grass; Eyes open and glazed over, mouth slightly ajar, already starting to drool. Dumbfounded, he looked down at his hands, watching as an orange misty like aura faded away from his finger tips. The boy with the piece of wood was gone by the time he snapped back to reality.
Explaining the situation and what happened to his father and the school's principle, after a medical examine to make sure he was physically healthy and not on drugs, was easier than Axel thought it would have been. At the end of it all, he sat outside the office while the adults spoke with one another. His principle would be the one to recommend that Axel enroll with Shibusen, the only place that would be able to train Axel and put his new-found talent to use properly.
Unbeknownst to Axel, he was 'offically' expelled from school for putting one kid in the hospital with a head injury, that he did not inflict, and putting another into a coma, whom awoken three weeks later with no memory of the incident.
Extra Notes: Sloppy Makeouts
Behind the strings Alias: Morti
RP Sample: Peering around the stone corner, Axel examined the alley that split either direction. Though it was broad daylight outside, it was still difficult to make out any discernable objects within the shadowy man-made chasm. He had been living within Death City for nearly a year and yet, for all of his wandering about, he still did not know the whol city. Every day he stepped out in a new direction, finding new paths and stores that he could swear did exist the day before. Though, that was why he did it, for the adventure of discovering something new. He was rather glad to live in such a city.
Stepping out, into the middle of the two directions now presented to him, he began to point back and forth, mutter under his breath as he left it to chance to figure out which direction he should go next. With the final word spoken, his finger landed to the left, his destiny had been decided. Bringing his crimson parasol spining up into the air, he popped it open and began to walk into the darkness that consumed his path. With a smile on his face, he walked without concern or care. This was the life... Though he was pretty sure he was suppose to be in class, but he had no desire to sit in a room with other teens and listen to an adult drone on and on about something that happened eight hundred years ago. Undesirable information that simply clogged his ears.
The imagry that came with this train of though made Axel chuckle softly as he visualized someone sitting at a desk with words jammed inside of his ears while a teacher yelled at him, trying to get him to hear. It was unfornuate, though, as his good humor did not last very long. It seemed destiny had choosen this direction for a reason. His pace began to slow until he came to a stand still, parasol obstructing his have, and his view of what was infront of him, though, at the time, he thought it was for the better as his ears gave him all the infromation he needed. Voices floated to him, gruff, aggravated voices. His lips twitched as his smile faded. He had been having such a good day.
"Come on. Just one date with me and my boy, I promise it'll be fun."
The lack of a response to such a, stunning, proposal was the confirmation that Axel needed. Setting forward at a brisk pace, his goal was set. Suddenly, he was upon the two young men and the teenage girl that they had cornered. Swooping up next to her, orange eyes shining, and a girn on his face, he looped her arm with his, "There you are sweetie! I was wondering where you'd wandered to," He said with a mixture of pleasant surprise and worry, though forced, sounded very convincing tohim. He began to move her away from the two, rather surprised, young men, when she finally snapped back to reality and said the three words that ruined everything.
"Who are you?"
All he could do was sigh as he felt their burning glares on him for trying to take the girl away when she didn't know him. Doing things the easy way never seemed to work out for Axel all that much it would seem. Letting go of the girl, he smiled at the two as they bared down on him. "Guys... Rock, paper, scissors?" He asked in a disappointing attempt to diffuse the situation. Sighing once more, he threw his parasol at the two in order to obscure their vision to give him an upper hand as the fight began... It always had to be the hard way.
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Post by Rylux on Sept 4, 2014 16:50:30 GMT -5
There are a few things that need some work so let’s get started. Partner: Please leave this blank until the characters are actually partnered Appearance: It has not been shown in the soul eater universe for eyes to be diamond shaped, as such he cannot have diamond shaped eyes. Also I would personally like some more detail on his body type and muscle mass to get a better idea of how he looks. Height/weight: According to the charts we use he is just a tad overweight, please drop his weight between 154-166. As he doesn’t seem to be terribly muscular I would say on the lower end. Weapon Form: This is where we run into some problems. -I feel like the variation from a simple scarf is too much. Just because he is a weapon doesn’t mean his form would be a more weaponized version of the object. - “Unlike other weapons” and here is a big problem. There is no reason he would be special so Axel would be as immobile in weapon form as any other demon weapon. Partial Form: – What hand can he transform? - Also following along with the weapon form the claws and spike are not going to work. Abilities: Simply put no. Altering his weapon form like that is a death scythe ability that comes from the consumption of a witch’s soul. Also destroying threads like you mention would be like ripping off his fingers so that really doesn’t work. The stretching is also not an ability he would have as that is essentially altering his weapon form. Weaknesses: lack of subtlety is not a weakness History: –His eyes wouldn’t change shape nor would they suddenly change color to that degree. -That isn’t how he would find out he was a weapon. That’s way too early for him to show signs and you offer no actual way he found out. -You’re in Iowa, which last I checked was in the United States. The school for weapons is in the same country so people aren’t going to be afraid of him for being a weapon regardless of how rural an area he lived in. -Also if he is a weapon somebody in his immediate family would also have to be a weapon, it is genetic. -We follow the manga so it is Shibusen not the DWMA -Sam wouldn’t be able to join unless she showed signs of having a strong enough soul to become a meister -That outburst of rage is more akin to madness and would keep him from entering Shibusen as he would be a potential threat of becoming a kishin egg -Shibusen wouldn’t send out people to pick him up. And news of someone with a demon hand would make most sensible people think weapon or kishin egg, the lack of missing souls disproves the latter. -With the changes that would need to be made there is no reason for his parents to dislike him and as such no reason to abandon him. RP Sample: –I recommend using a color to designate text -Your rp sample should be somewhat relevant to the character. If he is in the NOT class for the sample how did he reach One star? -Mr. Sid would be Mr. Barrett, and please don’t use canon characters in your profile -Partial transformations actually tend to come first before full weapon transformations, but either coming first is not uncommon Extra: Please look this over as there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes Read the character rules, you are missing something
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Post by Rylux on Sept 14, 2014 14:48:37 GMT -5
Much better than last time but there are still a few things that need to be addressed. Fighting Style: Focus more on how he fights. As it is most of what you have is comparing him to others. “Axel focuses on out-manuvering his foes, keeping them from landing a strike, and hitting fast, channeling the use of his Soul Purge to make of for his lacking in training. Axel will usually try to manuever the enemy into a position that will most benefit himself. Using speed with his intellect, he an usually avoid an enemies attacks quite well. It is all about waiting for the right opporunity to strike, as he cannot go on the defensive very well due to his lack of strength.” That is all that talks about how he fights. So he tries to outmaneuver targets and hit hard but how does he? Lacking strength means he won’t hit hard and if he only attacks with open palms I doubt he would have won any of the fights you say he was in. Abilities: I’m going to say no to his wavelength being a mist instead of the more static appearance that everyone else has. About the striking I feel that what you have is a more advanced level of soul purge he can get but not start with. Even the more advanced soul purge techniques we’ve seen have required contact of the striking variety, it goes along with forcing the wavelength into the target. History: – If you insist on having the bullies be a thing the reason should not be his hair and/or eyes. If he was weak and they picked on him for that it is one thing, making the cause his hair or eyes seems less likely. Even his outdated style of dress could be a reason. -Why did he move from the bench if he didn’t know what was happening? -As already stated his soul purge wouldn’t work like that. But also it would not be even close to that powerful. The kid would feel a shock but that is it. -What about the third boy? If they were that intent on attacking him I doubt he would just stop, let alone attack him while he was caught. -It also seems unlikely that he would be attacked on school grounds by people with weapons. Maybe if there was an actual reason people disliked him but that sounds much too extreme for the circumstances. -Why do they check to see if he is on drugs and say he should go to Shibusen? Yeah he can use soul purge but he could also just not and live a normal life. -If he has lived in Death City for a year why not elaborate that in his history. -I’d like to see stuff about him in his history. As it is nearly all of his history is about bullies picking on him because. Extra: Please look this over as there are some word mistakes and grammar errors that make understanding certain parts difficult.
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